Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Sunset Iceskating

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Almost every single night, before the sun set after doing all is chores on the farm a boy named Tyler would grab his ice-skates and go iceskating on the now frozen lake. It made Tyler think about what was going to happen when winter ended. One day after eating dinner he met a girl named Sydney at the lake. She said that she just moved here from Colorado. They soon became best friends, and met everyday at sunset to go iceskating. One day Sydney did not show up, so Tyler waited for her for 30 minutes. After 30 minutes she was still not there, so Tyler went to go look for her. "Sydney" he called.          



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  2. I want Tyler to find Sydney and ask her where she was, then she will tell him where she was and if something bad happened. Also they talk about it and Sydney might move away, then it ends saying goodbye but she get's a phone so they can text each other and FaceTime.

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  3. I really like this post and i think it should end with Sydney has to move and they had to say there final goodbye.

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  5. Hi,
    ....................As Tyler waited and waited he saw something in the distance. He went over to the middle of the lake. He noticed that there was a hole in the lake. He looked down in the lake and saw a body that looked like Sydney's body on the floor of the lake. At that moment Tyler new Sydney was gone.
    The End

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  6. Tyler kept walking and then he saw Sydney she was running at him full speed and yelling his name. when she got to Tyler she said "Tyler my mama and papa got in a fight'' Tyler felt so bad for her. "CRACK" they looked down and saw the ice was starting to crack. They looked at each other then they both ran. They were super scared and Sydney slipped and fell, Tyler ran back to get her but it was to late she had fallen in. Tyler got so scared but did what he had to, he ran and got his parents and they were trying to get Sydney out of the water in under a minute when they got her out she was freezing! They gave her a blanket and raped her in it and then rushed her to the car to go to the hospital. They got to the hospital very fast and rushed her in. They took her to the back and Tyler had to wait a long 45 minutes before he could go back and check on her. When Tyler got the okay he went back to see her and her heart beat was very slow but she was still alive.

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  7. I like how you let the viewers decide what happens next.

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